Great animation, HORRIBLE plot.
It's a shame that such a submission with an awesome animation skills, has an horrible and sick plot. I can stand watching these kinds of things but I'm sure most of the internet public won't.
A good thing about this flash, besides the awesome frame-by-frame animation, is the music choice. It fitted with the whole animation which gives a "disturbing" sensation.
I got to say that I laugh at the ending, lol, nice way to finish it.
I would use your animation skills for something clever and not movies like these ones, If I were you.
Conclusion: Sick, but well animated. Kudos on that.
Voting Power: 8.19
Voter Number: 305
Voted 2: 3.19 / 5.00 --> 3.18 / 5.00 (- 0.013)
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Awesome work, my dear friend!
I've never expected that reaction from the pug. You got me there.
I loved the animation, it was so smooth and nicely done. I love flash movies when they have a nice frame-by-frame animation, they look very professional. I loved the animation of the drops of the pug's sweat, they were awesomely animated.
And again, I never expected that ending. You made it just epic.
Voting Power: 8.15
Voter Number: 241
Voted 4: 3.40 / 5.00 (+ 0.0099)
Note: Glad to see an animator from Mexico... Paisano :)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA of course I enjoyed this!!
I haven't laughed that much for a lot of time. Man, awesome flash movie you made!
I loved every single detail of it, like the artwork and specially, the whole story. You've got an awesome and creative imagination by coming up with something like this. You've got me laughing through the entire flash movie!
Nice animation, by the way. Just like your Facebook adventure flash, it was very smooth.
As for the voiceacting, it was just simply great. Specially when I started to hear that annoying song from Justin Bieber, I almost fell off my chair.
Conclusion: This was awesome! Congrats :D
Voting Power: 8.15
Voter Number: Voted UJ, unknown info.
Nice work. Too bad it was too short.
Nice animation. It was very smooth, the tweens and the frame by frame styles were also nicely done. I just love when the animation of any flash looks like the ones we see in cartoons on TV. An awesome detail.
I have to be honest to you, I was quite dancing through the whole song and it put me a smile in my face. Talking about the music, the quality was awesome, simply great. It fitted perfectly with the plot of the flash movie :)
And finally I would like to say that this flash movie was too short. You should have made it longer, just another 30 seconds. It would had been more interesting, and of course, better. You just left me wanting more of this :P
Conclusion: Awesome movie, but it was too short :(
Voting Power: 8.15
Voter Number: Voted UJ. No info available.
Note: Oh, and by the way, awesome drawings and colors. I even thought the girl looked pretty hahaha :)
Note 2: Keep up the good work!
Aww, thank you!
Awesome animation & effects!
I loved the animation of the sticks, you made them very detailed and smoothly!
Not to mention the expression of the faces of your characters, they were nicely drawn according to the feeling they were supposedly to show. Simply amazing!
Nice music choice and quality, my dear sir! It mixed perfectly with the mind blowing animation.
Even if this has a main storyline or an exact plot, this managed to keep me watching it until the very end.
This is an example of how stick movies can be also awesome, if the author puts a lot of effort in it. And that's what I seem you did with this.
Conclusion: Awesome work! Congratulations!
Voting Power: 8.14
Voter Number: 453
Voted 5: 4.03 / 5.00 (+ 0.0053)
Very well written review, Huge thanks for taking the time to do that. :)
Random info: every other song in the movie except the main theme were made by me.
Very deep, emotive and awesome.
Even if the art wasn't that great, you still did an amazing frame by frame animation. I think your fps rate was above of 20 because the movements of your tweens were smooth. Animating by the FBF technique above of 20 FPS is very hard and it takes a lot of patience, I'm not surprised you took around 2 months to make this. But it was worth the hard work, this was beautiful and it describes perfectly the hard life of the spiders and other animals. I was shocked at some parts and I have to admit that I almost cried.
Nice music choice, it gave me a feeling of sadness through the whole flash movie. In fact, it was the most important detail of this movie. If it wasn't for the music then this flash wouldn't give that feeling. This was an example of how sometimes the music can boost a lot, the quality of a flash.
Conclusion: Perfect. This was perfect, in my opinion. If this had a better art quality then it would be out of of this world.
Voting Power: 8.14
Voter Number: 1,288
Voted 5: 4.17 / 5.00 (+ 0.0012)
Note: I favorited this.
Note 2: I can't wait for the sequel.
The plot was pretty random and weird, but it made me chuckle at some parts because of its randomness. But please, put more effort in the animation of your characters, specially in lip-sync because your characters didn't move their mouths at all!
Sorry to say it, but the flash ended to bore me because I felt it was very slow, and you used the same movieclip of the teacher moving many times.
At least the artwork was nicely done and the voiceacting too.
Conclusion: Nice art but lazy flash. Put more effort in the next time.
Voting Power: 8.13
Voter Number: 281
Voted 3: 3.20 / 5.00 --> 3.20 / 5.00 (- 0.0025)
Too many tweens but it was alright
This music video was short but decent. Nice music choice, I have to say that I enjoy the Beatles so that's pretty good to me.
The animation was nicely performed but you used too many tweens and the frame by frame animation was quite fast, in my opinion.
This would had been a lot better if the quality of the audio was higher. The better quality a flash has, the more people will enjoy it.
As for the plot, it was pretty random but that kind of weird animation fitted good with the song.
Conclusion: Nice but you can get better.
Voting Power: 8.12
Voter Number: 224
Voted 4: 2.73 / 5.00 (+ 0.031)
Note: You've got potential, just keep practicing your animation skills and you will get a lot better!
thank you :)
Quite decent but ends being boring...
The animation was nicely done. Simple, but nice and it seemed you put an effort to it. The audio quality was very poor and it almost ended annoying me, to be honest. Take in mind the quality of the audio and animation are the most superficial parts of any flash movie. As I already explained, the animation was OK but I'm afraid the audio not so much.
Also, I couldn't find myself the main story of this. I guess it's just an animation with the style of robot chicken or some show of that kind.
I noticed this was very calmed. No background music and lack of sound effects, that's why it ended boring me a lot. Even if the audio quality was pretty bad, at least the voiceacting was very good, I liked it.
Conclusion: Nicely animated but aim for better quality movies in the future.
Voting Power: 8.12
Voter Number: 250
Voted 3: 3.15 / 5.00 (- 0.0027)
Note: This was submitted in my 18th Birthday, haha.
I appreciate your criticism, I will take these pointers to heart.
A masterpiece XD
This made me laugh a lot. I almost fall off my chair, literally XD
Even if this is too short to give a detailed review, I gotta say the movements of BahamutClock were awesomely animated. Very smooth and decent.
I wanted to see SBC talking, though. Heh, I just wanted to see what could SBC respond to BahamutClock XD
Voting Power: 7.98
Voter Number: 237
Voted 5: 3.39 / 5.00 (+ 0.029)
Not sure what SBC, or rather RawberryClock would have said. :P Hell, I'm surprised there's been no RawberryClock before.
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