ThePigeonMaster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My First Flash Film]

You were like me when I started making movies...

Man! That wasn't a bad start! My first flash had the same quality too! But overall, Great first flash! I see you know some of the basics of the flash like streaming the sounds and music and you animated some parts by tweening and not frame by frame! ( I animated my 1rst flash by frame by frame, though).
Also, using sprites is an excellent way to learn how to animate well in flash, instead of crappy drawings or cool drawings that are really bad animated. =D

3 + 1 = 4/5
8 + 1 = 9/10

Note: I always give extra points at voting and review scores to 1rst flashes that are REALLY WELL ANIMATED!

Note 2: Take in mind that the only way to getting better... It's practicing by making and making flashes! And for every flash you make... more experience you get! =D

[Illusion gallery]

I hate slideshow flashes...but it was interesting!

I usually blam this kind of flashes but since I love optical illusions so muchi, I won't blam it!
I liked the font music, it mixed very well with the presentation! But you needed to make a bigger "next" button. I couldn't find where that button was but... It was just a small red dot... XD LOL And anyways it even included animated illusions! yay! =D
8/10
4/5

Note: TAKE NOTE: The menu tells about the flash! If the menu looks simple or crappy, people will think the flash will be crappy (however this wasn't crappy! it was OK), you should have added another color than just making buttons and writting! That would have been better!

; ) Hope this serves you jetfusion!

[The Plumber]

Simply fantastic!

It was very interesting to watch! Oh my god! The sounds were excellent and with a nice quality! Same situation with the drawings! This mario parody is different from other because their purposal... Is make you laugh with some jokes.
10/10
5/5

Note: You really deserve your trophies and this being in the legendary mario collection! CONGRATULATIONS!

; )

Haroshi responds:

thanks! =D

[The NG Rules]

unnecesary... but sorta of useful...

Dude, We alredy have a FAQ, but it's OK if you wanted to try this...
Firtst of all you should learn actionscript so you could make a menu and a "next" and "previous" buttons... Just coyping, pasting and tweening the rules (which is way too fast) is not something great...
7/10
3/5

Nomader responds:

Indeed, this was incredibly simple to make. It took but a day, and even then, the one motion tween I had was glitched. :D

Still, I'm thinking about one day actually putting some effort into it, with ActionScript and all -- but that's a long ways away. Thanks for the review!

[NG Welcome 2008]

Nice "New year" flash!

I actually liked the detail! I see this is your 1rst flash and you used your song. It was pretty good!
9/10
5/5

Note: WHY DIDN'T I REVIEW YOUR FLASH IN SPANISH SINCE WE SPEAK IT?
Because it's against the rules speaking in another language!
Anyway, nice flash! :)

aldlv responds:

thanx a lot...
I got the idea of using my song in the last minute...
& it was cool
lot of ppl liked that
so... thanx again man...
(&... yep... I know the rulez... XD... don't worry, english reviews are fine)

[Super Mario Funny]

Ok, let's imagine the movie has awesome graphics..

...It was kind of funny! All of those sounds, jokes, falls, and some other stuff... make it Ok... But you need to use good sprites sheets! I know there are some that when you make your movie it gets a lower quality and the colors screw up! Try to find the right sheet that doesn't screw up the colors! Still a good job!
8/10
3/5

Note: I loled at the background when it was loading the movie... Why did you choose that wallpaper?

donuts1 responds:

Lol, Thanks

[Animator vs. Animation II]

A masterpiece!

This flash has been in the 50 best for a veeeery long time! And the plot of the story got a nice mix of action, violence and comedy! Few flashes get a nice mix of those!
Other fact, is that the animation was perfect! It isn't a flash with a choppy animation, a really well animated flash! In less words... YOU'RE A SAINT NOOGAI! YOU ROCK!
10/10
5/5

[Mario P0wn]

Great mix!

This mix was so catchy, I'm singing it my mind right now! And the animation of the sprites were really good! Nice job! The only bad thing: It didn't have a preloader... (That's awful! That's why I am giving you a 9 :( ).

9/10
5/5

Note: Congratulations by getting the underdog of the week!

[Sonic Shorts: Volume 1]

Excellent!

I'm not a big fan of sonic but I'd like to say that was awesome! The drawings and the jokes were awesome!
Great job!
10/10
5/5

Note: This must be frontpaged!

[S.M.B.3 Bloopers]

Sebastián, This is a masterpiece!

When I watched this it feels like it was the real game! OMG! The jokes were also great and I loved every scene! There isn't a boring scene! Each one is excellent! Awesome job Sebastián! =D
10/10
5/5

Note 1: I think you left Newgrounds some time ago and never came back... Rest in Peace Sebastián... :'(

Note 2: Hope I am wrong!