ThePigeonMaster's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meet the Universe]

Very informative.

As a lover of Astronomy, I really liked the flash presentation. Sorry, but even if you explained you made some grammar mistakes because English isn't your mother language, I'm afraid I can't give you a higher score. Try to practice your grammar a bit more if you plan to do another one of these. I know what I'm saying since English isn't my mother language, too.
Something I liked in this, was the art. All the planets, stars, holes, galaxies and the comet were nicely drawn. Not to mention the background, it was also nicely made.
The music you used for this was simply perfect! A calmed and peaceful song was the kind of music this flash needed.
Conclusion: Awesome flash presentation. Too bad you screwed up with the grammar at some parts.
8/10
4/5

Voting Details:
Voting Power: 8.15
Voter Number: 360
Voted 4: 3.26 / 5.00 (+ 0.0058)

[Review Request Club]

***TPM***

MCarsten responds:

Thanks for like my universe presentation that I worked hard to show for the people, sorry for my grammar, I ask you apologize, and please, thanks Stephan Wells for the audio, it is his courtesy, is absolutely what I was trying to find, a peaceful audio for match with the universe explanation. Good you liked my background!

Thanks for your awesome review!
SpyS.

[Masiko Dress Up!!]

Very Boring

At first I got quite entertained making some nice combinations with all the clothes. But it just feels empty and dead. I mean, there's not any music, a background, a flash preloader. Know what I mean?
That's why it ended boring me a lot. Not to mention after when you play with it for a while, you search for something you used before but you can't find it because it's hidden under any other clothing. If you don't organize your clothes it just ends being a mess, specially in this game since there are a lot of stuff to play with.
Conclusion: Boring. It needs a lot of work if you plan to do another dress-up.
4/10
2/5

Voting Details:
Voting Power: 7.97
Voter Number: 306
Voted 2: 3.14 / 5.00 (- 0.012)

Note: I recommend you in learning ActionScript. Not just copy and paste scripts, actually UNDERSTAND the script, it's not hard at all. It's just about logic. If you plan to do another dress up you would make it even easier and cleaner by coding each piece of clothing to dress the character automatically with just one click.

Note 2: Don't feel bad because this wasn't successful as you may wanted. In fact, most of the reviewers actually want to help you by giving you tips. Don't give up, work harder next time and you will have success next time :)

[Review Request Club]

***TPM***

JabberWocky responds:

Nice name.
Anyway, yeah, I know. I get a bit creeped out by the fact that there's no music. And my memory is not good with remembering codes and shit...I'll just continue with my copying and pasting, but anyway, thanks for the advice. I appreciate it.

[-Space Scavenger-]

Addicting

I've gotta say this game was pretty addicting and kinda fun to play with.
There is a way to become unbeatable or invincible, though. But even with that, when you get over level 50, it will become useless since the whole screen gets invaded with "bombs".
As I can see, the size of this flash game is less than 1 MB. You would have used a higher FPS to make the game runs smoother, it wouldn't have affected the file size a lot.
Also, the game would have been less repetitive if each 20 levels you added a music loop in the game. It's not hard doing that. Just basic Actionscript.
Conclusion: Overall, a nice game. The main engine of the game is addictive, but if you added more details then this would be even greater.
7/10
4/5

Voting Details:
Voting Power: 7.95
Voter Number: 235
Voted 4: 2.98 / 5.00 (+ 0.037)

[Review Request Club]

***TPM***

fallensoul289 responds:

Yeah it was a last minute thing, I don't feel like adding to it.

[Animated Preloaders]

Awesome!

Finally! A tutorial that really helped me in making my own preloader! BUUUUUT...
It doesn't explain anything of the Script to all the noobs around that doesn't understand ActionScript. I managed myself to understand this tutorial because I already know the basics of AS.
Anyway, thanks for the information and now I know how to make my own preloader! Thanks :D
Conclusion: This isn't really a tutorial, but at least give information.
9/10
5/5

Voting details:
Voting power: 6.97
Voter number: 1,059
Voted 5: 3.48 / 5.00 (+ 0.0023)

Note: Thanks for the info, again :D

***Pigeonmaster88***

PARAGON-pvp responds:

"all the noobs" you're right!

[Icon tutorial]

Thanks to this tutorial I've made 131 icons so far

Dude, thank you so much for making this simple but helpful tutorial. I don't care if it has bad graphics or if it hasn't animation, this tutorial was helpful and it still gets my 5.
A music would have made it better but there's no point at all for arguing for a flash that was made 2 years ago :P
Conclusion: Thanks for the tutorial.
9/10
5/5

Voting details:
Voting power: 6.63
Voter number: 620
Voted 5: 2.96 / 5.00 (+ 0.0035)

Note: By the way, I watched this tutorial before. I'm just leaving you my thoughts :P

***Pigeonmaster88

Myst responds:

Thanks for the review, it's very nice. You pretty much got the point of my flash, I wanted to make something simple and quick. However I can't deny it's a pretty simple one. I just didn't have the time to make much more out of it.

Thanks anyway, keep up the good work :)

[How to get Deity]

Why people are so mean?

I mean, this guide was good enough to get yourself a deity whistle.
And just because some users already know this information that doesn't mean they can be douches or presuming they know it all. That's unfair and immature...
As for the flash, as I said, it was good enough. The info may be simple to some users but it was detailed. I would have liked it more if you included more examples, and also, you forgot about the chain reviews :P
But I have to sorta agree with DaVeB0T, I could make this in 5 minutes too, but he didn't need to act like a douche. Try to spend more time when making a good tutorial, because the info is good but the graphics were cheap. That's why I'm rating it with 7 stars.
Conclusion: Nice guide but it could have been better :)
7/10
5/5

Voting details:
Voted 5: 3.73 / 5.00 (+ 0.0050)

Note: Just because this flash was made to help people you get my 5, but I gave a fair score in the review. I always vote 5 in helpful flashes :)

Note 2: Look at your score, if you would have spent more time making it then this could have gotten a better score :(

***Pigeonmaster88***

Phil responds:

Thanks for the awesome review!
Your right tho... I didn't spend too long on this.

[Abusive Review Guide 2]

Definitively a 10 stars worth tutorial :)

Even if the graphics weren't mind blowing, they were a lot better than the last guide. A thing that I liked about this tutorial was the quiz section, I got a deity whistle :P
The tutorial was very useful and it had some tips that you can't find in the review guidelines, thumbs up on that, guys ;)
Conclusion: Excellent guide :D
10/10
5/5

Voting details:
Voted 5: Voted while judging, no info available.

Note: Thanks for whishing me a happy birthday Rohan :3
Note 2: And corky, good luck on becoming a review moderator, even if you're still have a long way, you're even more closer ;)

***Pigeonmaster88***

RohantheBarbarian responds:

Happy b-day man, I'm happy that you found it useful and thanks for reviewing!

[JonBro's Newgrounds Pass]

Nice version :)

I loved Nicholas-Deary's game, and your version of Newgrounds pass was, actually, very good. Something that I really liked was the music selection, nice choice XD.
The game was awesome, it was simple but great :)
Conclussion: Very good!
9/10
5/5

Voting details:
voted 5: 3.75 / 5.00 (+ 0.0069) =D

Note: I'm looking foward for more games and movies from you ;)

***Pigeonmaster88***

JonBro responds:

Pigeonmaster88

That username has a deep meaning that I'm not sure I'll ever truly understand.

It's simply brilliant.

[iPod Touch-ish]

That was nice! Now I learned how this works!

I really loved this interactive flash, it really has the same functions of a real iTouch which is awesome, dude! Other fact is that you could see the latest flash submissions. The quality of the game was great, I really liked the piano songs!
Actually I don't look for flashes like this, but I'll make an exeption this time because that was nice! Now I learned how this works!
Conclussion: Awesome job! =D
4 + 1 = 5/5
8 + 1 = 9/10

Note: Make a sequel please! =(
Note 2: I'm giving you an extra point at voting and review because the mario movie made me ROFL! hahaha nice!

***Pigeonmaster88***

Matty2-and-a-half responds:

It's amazing to see how many people who usually hate things like this love mine. :-D

[Riddle School 3]

Riddle games are my style!

Hey jonbro! Nice flash you've got! I really liked the concept of riddle school I, II and this one! The riddles are really well done and the art was something amazing!
Nice choice of music too! Actually this may sound a boring game, but when you play it, you love it! Nice flash game jonbro! I'll stay tuned to find more submissions from you in the future! ;)
10/10
5/5

Note: I favorited this game!
Note 2: I got stucked in the first room... for 20 minutes... Don't laugh!

JonBro responds:

I'll admit, I snickered... I'm sorry! =(

Thanks for the review!